From your post, it is safe to draw the following conclusions:
1. In your eyes, the piece in my first note here is trash, both in organization and content.
2. I have been going in the wrong way.
I have one question: what shall I do to improve my writing?
I have one wish: I could be student in writing.
I have one dream: I can write better.
i have writen many articles in office time about my thought and daily life. but i find that my writing ability is still poor. sometimes, i talk with myself "is it useful to write?" i want to write something everyday, but i have no idea about the use. maybe it is just a hobby. i think i will stick to it. never suspect your own choice!