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the little book says "a1, a2, and a3".

the original comments by ptb:

At present, the university comprises 17 schools and 6 departments, covering such diverse fields as science, technology, liberal arts, law, economy, management, philosophy, foreign languages and education.

a comma is needed: it should be "foreign languages, and education." don't you agree

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agree. in this quote, "foreign languages and education" can be interpreted as foreign languages and foreign education (although i have little idea what foreign education is meant to be here).

the "little book" asks to use commas to separate all the elements in the list.

let's say we have four guests: paul chen, john wu and his son mike, and cathy lin, which can be enumerated as paul chen, john  wu, mike wu(,) and cathy lin.

do we need the comma before the last name? certainly we do. the reason? john and mike can be father and son.

now we consider a list of three mutually exclusive elements {a, b, c} where b consists of two parts b1 and b2. we will have a number of different ways to call these elements:

(1) a, b1, b2 and c  (paul, john, mike and cathy)
(2) a, b1, b2, and c  (paul, john, mike, and cathy)
(3) a, b1 and b2 and c  (paul, john and mike and cathy)
(4) a, b1 and b2, and c  (paul, john and mike, and cathy)

suppose that this is a tour group. then which way you would like the guests be enumerated?
(1) and (3) are confusing.  (2) is okay. but (4) is the best because it is capable of giving the maximum information in the same simple form. expression (4) also shows how to use "and" to join two items and to join more than two items.

similarly, "red, white, and blue" is correct, where the second comma (after white) is needed to indicate that white as a color is independent of blue. the use of "and" to enumerate a list of three or more elements is different from that to join two related sentences into one. when two sentences are joined by the conjuction "and", no comma is needed. however, when more than two sentences are joined, commas would be needed in the same way as it has been described above for joining words. that is, subsentence1, subsentence2, and subsentence3.

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Post time 2006-3-18 13:45:50 |Display all floors
Originally posted by canadian45 at 2006-3-18 12:29
I will tell you once more that 'red, white, and blue' is WRONG!!! The rule you quoted probably means 'except the last' item BEFORE 'and'.  It would make no sense for them to be telling us no ...


What I quoted are exactly the rule itself and the examples by the author in The Elements of Style, which, it seems to me, has been regarded as a biblical reference for English writers ever since its publication in the 1910s.

Save the exclamation marks. Show us whatever rule you are abiding by.


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I support ptb and nyleda on the issue of comma...

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even this top-notch piece has some flaws

北京外国语大学的:

About BFUS    Beijing Foreign Studies University (BFSU) is a key university under the Ministry of Education (MOE). BFSU has long enjoyed a good reputation in the qualities of her language teaching programs and has witnessed rapid development in teaching and research activities over the past two decades. BFSU now is incorporating more interdisciplinaries programs and offers a variety of tertiary education programs (programs with BA, MA, Ph.D. degrees or certificates).

   There are 9 academic departments at BFSU. They are departments of English, German, French, Arabic, Spanish, Japanese, Afro-Asian Languages, East European Languages and Social Sciences. In addition, there are 7 schools and institutes at BFSU. They are School of Russian, Graduate School of Translation and Interpretation, School of English Communication, School of Adult Education, School of International Economy and Trade, School of International Exchange and Research Institute of Foreign Languages and Culture. Other facilities include the University A-V Center, and the University Library.

   BFSU offers 30 undergraduate programs in foreign language studies including English, Russian, French, German, Japanese, Spanish, Arabic, Italian, Swedish, Portuguese, Kampuchean, Vietnamese, Lao, Burmese, Thai, Indonesian, Malay, Sinhalese, Turkish, Korean, Swahili, Hausa, Polish, Czech, Hungary, Romanian, Bulgarian, Serbo-Croatian, and Albanian. BFSU also provides undergraduate programs in information management, Chinese as a foreign language, international economy and trade, and international studies.

    BFSU provides post-graduate programs leading to a master’s degree in arts or a doctoral degree in philosophy. BFSU has 7 Ph.D. programs in the areas of English Language and Literature, Russian Language and Literature, German Language and Literature, Arabic Language and Literature, Japanese Language and Literature, Spanish Language and Literature, and European Languages and Literature. BFSU also offers post-doctoral fellowships in Foreign Languages and Literature studies. There are 11 MA programs at BFSU including English, Russian, German, Arabic, Japanese, Spanish, European Languages, French, Afro-Asian Languages, linguistics and applied linguistics in foreign languages, and linguistics and applied linguistics in Chinese. English Language and Literature at BFSU is a state-recognized key study of the discipline.

  BFSU offers the largest number of language learning programs and other interdisciplinary studies in China. The university draws the support from her highly-qualified and well-recognized faculty and staff in teaching and research in the areas of foreign language studies, literature, linguistics, translation and culture studies. Two of the professors at BFSU are members of the Academic Disciplines Subcomittee of the Academic Degrees Committee under the State Council; Twelve professors at BFSU sit on the University English Teaching Steering Committee under the MOE. Four professors are recognized by the state for their distinguished academic achievements. Another 115 faculty members are recognized by the state for their academic performance and receive state subsidies. The faculty members at BFSU have scored fruitful results in teaching and research in their academic fields over the past decades. They have contributed to the training of qualified professionals well-versed in foreign languages and to the progress of BFSU’ s teaching, research and program development. Many of them have become leading figures in their academic fields and enjoy good reputation in the academic community.

  BFSU has won the name of a“garden university” with her attractive physical environment for learning in the Western suburbs of Beijing. The campus occupies an area of 304,553 square meters, with a student dorm area of 40,000 m2 and a library of 9997 m2. Other facilities on campus include an A-V Center, dinner halls, a university hospital, a stadium and tennis courts.

  BFSU was qualified for the first round of the competition in her efforts to enter the “ 211Project”, launched by the Ministry of Education in 1996. The initial success is a hallmark in the history of the development of BFSU. BFSU aims at developing into a world class university known for her excellence in language learning/research and multi-disciplinary studies and providing learning opportunities to cater the growing needs in the Chinese society for well-training and competent professionals with high levels of proficiency in foreign languages.
  Beijing Foreign Studies University evolved from the Yan’ an School of Foreign Languages based on the Russian Language Unit of the Third Branch of the Chinese People’ s Anti-Japanese Military and Political College. The latter was established by the Chinese Communist Party in response to the development of the war against the Japanese invasion. Ever since her initiation, the Party Central Committee and the late Chinese leaders, including Mao Zedong and Zhou Enlai, has provided great care and teachings for the development of the university. BFSU has been China’ s principal base offering excellent training in foreign language learning and teaching. The university has turned out a large number of graduates with high levels of proficiency in foreign languages, who work in government departments of foreign relations or related areas since 1949. In her history of over half a century, Chinese leaders Zhou Enlai, Zhu De, Chen Yi, Ye Jianying, Yang Shangkun, Liao Chengzhi, among others, have provided great care and guidance to the university. BFSU was affiliated to the Ministry of Foreign Affairs from her establishment to the early 1980s and it is currently a key university under MOE.



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Post time 2006-3-18 21:32:15 |Display all floors
BUAAWJ: there are some blunders in your president's welcome message.

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