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Pretty good! Its meaning is clear, although the grammar and style are not native.|
"mid & slap-up jewelries," needs some work though.because slap-up is very informal and usually applied to parties or meals and means very good. Never applied to jewellry though.
"and so on" is meaningless and should be omitted.
What’s more," is not really useful and "til now' should also be left out.
You normally design a product and then produce it so it would be more common to put the words in the same order.
Bracelet, necklace, earring,, brooch might sound better if these have an "s" on the end of each. Chain and body jewelry are OK.
XXXXX Ornaments & Trade Co Ltd is a long established company specialising in the design and production of fashion jewelry and handcrafts, Talented and creative designers and craftsmen, supported by enlightened management, supply mid & high-end products in most alloy, silver and copper materials.
Our major products are bracelets, necklaces, earrings, hand chain, brooches, body jewelry, and key chain featuring fashionable design, reliable quality, low price and prompt delivery.
We excel at filling specialty orders according to customer’s specific requirements.
Our products enjoy a high reputation among discerning customers in Europe, America, the Middle- East, and across South-East Asia.
Our customers appreciate the benefits of our advanced management, modern technology and excellent service and we feel certain that those still looking for quality products at the right price will find XXXX the perfect partner in a long-term, friendly and mutually rewarding business relationship.
[ Last edited by leesinchina at 2006-3-9 06:59 PM ]