My frined jointed a test trial for recruitment of translator with a website and she did the following translation from Chi to Eng, later the result given by the panel said the translation was not satisfactory and she was rejected.
She then consulted me, a returned stuent of the USA, for refrence. After my perusal, I think it is not as bad as the panel said and the panel is very unfair to a job seeker due to their low ability.
Here we go, you can give your critique.
本次展会已得到了行业内主要企业、国内权威行业媒体及贸易协会的鼎力支持。截至2018年1月31日，已有逾500家厂商报名参展，展览面积愈8万平方米。The expo has received the tremendous support from major players of theindustry, China’s prestigious trade media and chambers of commerce. Asof Jan 31, 2018, more than 500 companies have signed up for the exhibition, with an area of over 80,000 square meters.