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our youth(serial 5)

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stop!the teacher were ordered him,he was so angry.he rebuked him:”are you becoming hero?aren’t you? we had made the discipline before we came here,everyone can not buy food in the countryside,do you remember it?”

Liu Tao looked at the teacher and said slowly:”teacher,you are is plug your ears while stealing a bell, if the paysants don’t know how is the happy life between us, how do they do harder farm work? How to cut down differen between us? I had ate the apricot, now I knows that is so sour and sweet.!”

All the students were laughing,there were one classmate cried:”I want to eat!”

The meeting were so tumble.


Liu Tao was arranged to clean the pigsty. The teacher told him with severe:”you must go to pigsty to clean your thought, because your thought is belong to the capitalist class, so you must fix your thought during cleaning pigsty!”

Liu Tao answered at once. He pledged to teacher and said :”don’t; worry teacher, I must clean my thought during cleaning pigsty.alothough the pigsty is so dirty and smelly,but my thought is more smelly than it.” He smiled to teacher.

The theacher was surpring,he asked himself in his heart:what will be happen?



Next day, Liu Tao was very happy to go pigsty.he smiled and said to his classmates:”don’t’ worry about ne, I must make the well emotion with pig, so I can retain a pity to pig when I will eat them!”

He arrived pigsty ,his brows got to tighter, here was so smelly.he told to peasant that what work he can do.

The peasant looked at him and asked :”why do you like to work here?”

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  • our youth (serial 42) 2020-5-9 18:53

    I suggest that you read the New Yorker, the Paris Review, and Harper's if you strive to learn how to write like a literary type;  such A-list publications publish several gripping stories every week or month.  At the very least, you could learn how to flesh out this story with more detail. Good luck to you.

  • our youth (serial 35) 2020-5-3 19:31

    Sorry for being plain-spoken, and I don't mean to discourage you from writing creatively, just one suggestion: in addition to spending time developing the plot of your story, please also put in the hours to work on grammar and other basics of English.

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