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witnesser
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I chocolate you!怎么翻译？

LG公司推出了一款手机，款型非常可爱，通体黝黑，四方四正，乍看很像一块巧克力。而这款机型的名字也恰如它的造型-- "I chocolate you."汉语的译文是"爱巧克力呦"！
也有人提议译为"爱你爱不完"或"爱你永不变"。这种商业广告怎样翻比较好呢？

读过几个很好的例子：


某香水广告"Her smile could heat up a nation. Her fragrance captured a country."译文为"迷魂牵魄笑貌，倾国倾城芳香。"

敦豪快递的广告"DHL worldwide express: the Pulse of Business."翻译为"商业命脉，随我而动。"

Sony音响的广告"Hi-fi, Hi-fun, Hi-fashion, only for Sony."翻译为"索尼音响--高保真、高享受、高时尚。"

建行龙卡的广告"衣食住行，有龙则灵"译文为"Your everyday life is very busy, Our Long Card can make it easy."

《全球杂志》的广告"一册在手，总揽全球"，对应译文为"With a copy of The Globe in your hand, the world unfolds before you so grand."
2009-8-29 12:10 PM#1
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爱巧克力呦"！

爱巧克力呦"！ 音和意结合，有味道。
如果往前音译的话：我爱，你巧， 如何？
2009-9-1 10:07 PM#2
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QUOTE:
Originally posted by emilyw73 at 2009-9-1 22:07
爱巧克力呦"！ 音和意结合，有味道。
如果往前音译的话：我爱，你巧， 如何？
( ^_^ )不错嘛，还是觉得“爱巧克力吆”就很好哈
2009-9-2 10:13 PM#3
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chocolate is somethin most of us like...



QUOTE:
Originally posted by witnesser at 8/28/09 11:10 PM
LG公司推出了一款手机，款型非常可爱，通体黝黑，四方四正，乍看很像一块巧克力。而这款机型的名字也恰如它的造型-- "I chocolate you."汉语的译文是"爱巧克力呦"！
也有人提议译为 ...
the phrase, i chocolate you is really a slang term which referrin to someone's that you like very much or (s)he is really sexi in physically appearance; just narrow it down your thinkin a little then you'd get the inner meaning of most SLANG terms  
2009-9-2 10:25 PM#4
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O(∩_∩)O~

ditto
2009-9-4 11:32 AM#5
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wow

so  cute  l  like it very  much
2009-9-27 11:02 AM#6
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拙见

如果音译的话好像体会不出i chocolate u 是someone that you like very much or (s)he is really sexi in physically appearance的意思。


how about 爱着你哟
2009-9-27 07:02 PM#7
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把 chocolate 当作动词，就容易明白了，，，其实，chocolate 在这里就是动词。
2009-9-30 08:19 AM#8
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Reply #8 英文123's post

你是我的甜心巧克力
2009-9-30 03:35 PM#9
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那对猫说 i cat u 也可以啦？
2009-10-4 11:45 AM#10
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you said that the phone is like a chocolate,so the translation "爱巧克力呦"is very good!
2009-10-4 09:11 PM#11
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QUOTE:
Originally posted by fallback at 2009-10-4 11:45
那对猫说 i cat u 也可以啦？
maybe!
2009-10-4 09:12 PM#12
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QUOTE:
Originally posted by emilyw73 at 2009-9-30 15:35
你是我的甜心巧克力
this is what i thought, 你是我的巧克力， 这里加上甜心修饰似乎更好了。
2009-10-12 05:22 PM#13
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哈哈，终于有人认可了呀，感觉好呀
不过，我更喜欢 我爱，你巧
2009-10-12 10:32 PM#14
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我请你吃巧克力。
2009-10-23 04:25 PM#15
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奇思妙想“我请你吃巧克力”
2009-10-23 08:34 PM#16
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你是我的巧克力，意为，你是我的甜心
2009-10-26 09:55 AM#17
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你是我的巧克力
2009-10-26 05:12 PM#18
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“我巧克力你”。。。
2009-10-29 08:22 PM#19
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爱你没商量
2009-11-2 01:43 PM#20
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