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Subject: Tonight I can write the saddest lines（今夜我可以写出最悲壮的诗篇）
 
paddychin
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Tonight I can write the saddest lines（今夜我可以写出最悲壮的诗篇）

Tonight I can write the saddest lines
（今夜我可以写出最悲壮的诗篇）
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Tonight I lie on the cold and wet ground
Feeling that I can hear the saddest sound
The sound is from no where but the quake site
That makes me the saddest lines to write
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With a pen, I ask the Heaven in the sky
Why You made us suffer by and by
You led People into disaster by snow
You made all and all homes full of woe
You killed our people by striking the train
That brought all families pains again
You destroyed homes and homes by the quake
And killed children and children in the shake
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If you are not staying in such a damned height
I will climb up to fight you with no fright
I get to my paper with dim and dim light
And have got the saddest lines to write
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Tonight I can write the saddest lines
For lying in the darkest moon-shines
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Tonight I can write the saddest line
For the death of all friends of mine
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Tonight I can write the saddest line
For I can still hear the sorrowful whine
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2008年5月20日凌晨01点  作于重庆大学  思群广场  避震时
2008-5-21 09:50 AM#1
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China, Don't Cry.

China, Don't Cry.
Though we've lost homes and families,
we have power and faith still.
With this power and faith,
we will be able to work together;
to fight together;
to struggle together;
to stand up from the quake toghter
knowing that we will be successful one day.
China, Please DON'T cry!
2008-5-21 10:10 AM#2
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come on China

Don't cry for me ,China!
We all firmly believe that  our nation could dear this disaster.
Yes we could.
2008-5-21 11:26 AM#3
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Disasterts bring us not only hurt nut also make our heart stronger.
We will overcome this period and embrace a better future.
Be sure we can,  all the Chinese.
Unite, we are one!
2008-5-21 02:19 PM#4
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I love these saddest lines!

You and your work impress me so much and I am moved!
REALLY good stuff from a promising poet.
2008-5-22 02:44 PM#5
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QUOTE:
Originally posted by paddychin at 2008-5-21 09:50
Tonight I can write the saddest lines
（今夜我可以写出最悲壮的诗篇）
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Tonight I lie on the cold and wet ground
Feeling that I can hear the saddest sound
The sound is from no where but the qu ...
that's really good!
2008-5-22 03:03 PM#6
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any part time job i can do, just like tour guide, temporary interpretor, website editor, anyone if you need.
Now i am a export sale in Shanghai.
Need work to kill spare time. I have two days off one week, and enough time online.
Sometimes i go to the library, since i have few friends here.

Previous i worked as translator, sales officer, English editor.

If you require a person for part time job, pls contact. Thank you. We can also be a friend then.

[ Last edited by elina112 at 2009-1-7 11:28 AM ]
2008-5-22 03:08 PM#7
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After revising it, I changed the last two lines into:

Tonight I can write the saddest lines
For the coming of tomorrow's sunshines
2008-5-22 04:46 PM#8
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YES,It's for the coming of tomorrow's sunshines .
COME ON ! CHINA
2008-5-24 04:30 PM#9
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Poem by a cynical european

40`000?

50`000?

60`000 Dead?

Honestly said, it does not matter, as long in europe is good weather...


Truly yours

F
2008-5-25 12:43 AM#10
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Poet is very good

The poet is very good, the poem to reflect the earthquake, show and train collision disaster show feeling that all of the chinese people love their country and people, I love it.
2008-5-25 10:29 AM#11
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This is a good poem.I love it.
2008-5-26 03:38 PM#12
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Thank you for the compliment

i did my best
2008-5-26 08:02 PM#13
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QUOTE:
Originally posted by martind at 2008-5-25 10:29
The poet is very good, the poem to reflect the earthquake, show and train collision disaster show feeling that all of the chinese people love their country and people, I love it.
I love this poem!
2008-5-30 12:12 AM#14
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Math it China

We have no idea how many lives lost in the earthquake.
    We have no idea how great the lost is .
But we have to remind ourselves to cheer up .
2008-5-30 01:06 PM#15
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Dont' cry, China.
2008-5-30 02:48 PM#16
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it's a great work, good job!
2008-5-31 11:27 PM#17
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Why and why?
We must suffer such disasters?
2008-6-2 10:02 AM#18
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best poem

Brother,you've written your best poem with your true feeling.Never  mind,we are all with you.Tip off your sadness,and put forward your foot.
2008-6-3 03:48 PM#19
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so beautiful!!
2008-6-3 05:51 PM#20
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