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Post time 2006-11-22 08:52:35 |Display all floors
Originally posted by superkylin at 21/11/2006 11:41 PM
There's the first english poem I ever wrote, about 3 years ago...=P

A Journey to My Dreamland

Down to the road I'm going to my dreamland
A long road goes on and on seems endless
Walk throug ...


I don't mind one little bit super, all are welcome to post :) for your first english poem you did realy well, it certainly helps to write about your own thoughts and feelings :)
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Post time 2006-11-22 08:56:27 |Display all floors
ok here is another one , this one I wrote during my darkest of days , it will become clear why I am the way I am :)

Damaged Good’s

People they judge me they think I am wrong
They don’t understand the thing’s I have done
How can they realise the pain that I feel
My fears and my doubts my heartache is real
If hope is the rope then it ties me in knot’s
I need some release for this torture to stop
My love turned to hate it happened so fast
I thought that my marriage was true and would last
I trusted that bitch I thought it was love
She looked like an angel been sent from above
How could she betray me in our own bed
I hurt him so bad she thought he was dead
The love that I had was replaced with a hole
A bottomless pit that went down to my sole
They say that time can dull all your pain
It’s been twenty two years and I’m waiting in vain
I now carry baggage where ever I go
I’ve learned to conceal so it does not show
But how can I trust and be happy again
When all I can think of is cutting my veins
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Post time 2006-11-22 13:55:24 |Display all floors
and another one :

The Cleaner:

Devoid of all feeling a shell of a man
No baggage to speak of all part of the plan
No discernable features as bland as the rest
No id or papers he does not exist
He’s working fulltime not that you’d tell
He finds all the sinners and sends them to hell
A knife or a gun the tools of his trade
The scene in his head has already been played
The morgue may be filling but he cannot stop
His list is still full he’s just at the top
The police have no motive not even a clue
He is good at his job through and through
The street is his stage the people his props
As the knife exits another one drops
No one gets spared no plea bargains made
All reason is tempered with the edge of his blade
The angel of mercy or angel of death
All sinners beware he wants your last breath
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Post time 2006-11-22 14:34:14 |Display all floors

envy envy envy.....................
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Very Important Pig
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Post time 2006-11-22 14:42:54 |Display all floors
Originally posted by iamnobody at 22/11/2006 04:34 PM

envy envy envy.....................


envy over what iamnobody :)

here is one of my drawings see if you can guess who it is suposed to be :)
gwen copy.jpg
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Post time 2006-11-22 14:48:02 |Display all floors
painting???woooooooooooooooooow
envy again.........
envy your writings and your painting
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Post time 2006-11-22 14:51:46 |Display all floors

Reply #19 cyberspook's post

Obviously, it should be Super Kylin!

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