Author: cyberspook

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Post time 2006-11-21 20:48:25 |Display all floors
I believe your 68  (the year of manufacture ) has shared your happiness and sadness for many years ........It experinced many things togerher with you. that's why you have a strong feeling in it........ very touching poem.....

Your poem reminds me of  Pygmalion -- the ancient Greek craftsman..... He created a figure of a woman from a splenndid block of marble.  With every day, she seemed less like a work of art , and more like a real person. He found that he  had fallen love with the wonderful thing he made. As he completed his final strokes, that his love worked an astonishing miracle.....Love had changed her from stone to human flesh and blood.,........         a very touching story, right??????

Your stone cold heart  will  be warmed soonnnnn .

[ Last edited by hearthome at 2006-11-21 08:54 PM ]

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Post time 2006-11-21 20:53:38 |Display all floors
if that's the case I'm in the wrong business I should of become a stone mason ;) you are right about my car I have had it for a long time and I have poured my blood sweat and tears into it and now it looks like it should , I will scan a picture of it and I will put it with the poem :)
There are no Ugly women , only those with low self esteem .

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Post time 2006-11-21 20:58:34 |Display all floors
Originally posted by cyberspook at 2006-11-21 20:53
if that's the case I'm in the wrong business I should of become a stone mason ;) you are right about my car I have had it for a long time and I have poured my blood sweat and tears into it and now  ...


haaaaaaaaa      your lover knows how to work on you .........
Then we will wait to see drawing and the poem......... they will match each other well i believe........

I will log off. Have a good day, spook.   

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Post time 2006-11-21 21:32:36 |Display all floors
I like Stone Cold Heart, proud and sad.
and the poem Obsession, about your car's so vivid and interesting with some witty puns
you give her life with the poem, or actually I feel like she has a life and alive through your poem.  :)

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Post time 2006-11-21 21:41:43 |Display all floors
There's the first english poem I ever wrote, about 3 years ago...=P

A Journey to My Dreamland

Down to the road I'm going to my dreamland
A long road goes on and on seems endless
Walk through the woods where I stand
In the shadows of trees casting darkness
In the dark I hear all the trees whispering
In the dark I sense a monster approaching
In the dark I feel eyes of evilness glittering
In the dark I smell an evil tongue sneering
But I'm still on my way
The land where my dreamland lies none can say
Silver stars from welkin point out the way:
"When the dense fog gone, your way will come!"
"Ahead there're, hundreds of mountains, thousands of rivers"
"Just go through them till"
"The daybreak, with a flaming ray!"
Following the roads I have gone
A realm appears with rising of the sun
Birds singing, melody echoing
Trees green, land blooming
In name of a dreamer, in honor of a will
I thank their welcome, and my dream has truly come!

Okay....a bit lame maybe silly, but what a sunny youth at that time!
hope you don't mind my posting here in your thread...

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Post time 2006-11-21 21:53:00 |Display all floors
"A realm appears with rising of the sun
Birds singing, melody echoing
Trees green, land blooming
In name of a dreamer, in honor of a will
I thank their welcome, and my dream has truly come!"

How wonderful! most time ,when I got my goal,I felt that I was not happy as imagination.So I really hope find
the true happiness as my your poem description---------
I am rambling---------

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Post time 2006-11-21 22:27:28 |Display all floors
thank you kcathy...well, I guess true happiness comes after darkness...that's just my lil humble poem

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